Yes, captain..

first of all, gorgeous model..!!
i love how you setup the lights to include flare in your shoot, the low contrast and the twotone colors makes this shoot have a more retro feel and look. That and the wardrobe that she is wearing and pose also adds up very well.
if there is anything that is need to make this better is to have the model express more feelings with her stare, i feel that she is not fully in the mood of the shot.
other than that, brilliant shot, and we need more shoots from this series
good joob